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WE NEED HOLIDAY

Every body need holiday, for refresh his mind, and we know  sometimes our job is very hard example like study or we working at one place like restourant, saller and enyelse, sometimes we need refreshing for our life so that we can enjoy, like go to other place to see a natural place its all just for fun, and this a short story about me, when we go to the bira beach for refreshing in holiday.

The first i thing we will go to the bantimurung in maros but my father say “its so far”, i wanna go there because i never come in the bantimurung i want to see the butterfly because my friend say bantimurung is a good place and so many butterfly, , but what can be done so the last choise is bira beach, my village not have long time to go there so at 06:00 oclock in the morning  me and my family raeady for go to bira beach by car,  and i can see the bantaeng town its a good town in my mind .

The second, at 09:00 i became to bira beach, its a good place too, many turist here, and the sands color is a white very wonderfull, its a second time i coming here and then i gat out from the car with my cousin and i run go to the beach, and i swim, after that i back to the car because my mother call me to eat im very happy because i can with my family today, i can forget all of my home work from school its so good and i hope i can like this every week but its imposible,

Finally go back to malakaji and i hope next holiday i comehere again inthis place bira beach in bulukumba, at 08:00 night i bicome to malakaji im so tired i just can say i sleepy mom and i go to take bath and then i sleep in my bedroom i hope i can have a nice dream this night i hope i can refreshing with my family again but its a last time  me and my family holiday together and until now my i never go enywhere together they all so busy with her activity. Now im study in makassar and if i back to my village no one will go to refresing together they all have many job in his garden.  I want like the past, holiday together

Concluasion is i want like the past, i can goto the bira beach together with my family but now i cant they all have a many actifity, but holiday can make u happy, you can forget all of your problem in your school, like problem with your friends, your assigmant, no time for remember that you just will be happy with your familiy.

MY HOMETOWN

Every body may go to the other country, or the other town for a work or study, and he go far from his village, but we can happy if we can go back to hometown if holiday, and now i will tell you about my hometown in malakaji,

Malakaji is one of small town in Gowa, it has a cool town, malakaji like malino but the different betwen malakaji and malino just a tour place. Malakaji is’nt a place for tour, Malakaji is a good place because you can see a natural jungle, every morning we can see a people go to work in the garden, because Majority of people of malakaji is a farmer, they dont undrstand about teknologi, because the tecknologi there it so minimum, but the people of my hometown it so friendly if you go there.

My hometown not special but i like malakaji because if i there i can relax i can forget all of my problem if i back to my hometown, because there is a nature situasion, i can meet with my family or i can go to the jungle with my friends for serch a bee and rattan, malakaji it so near with lompobattang montain so 70% malakaji is a jungle and there we kan find many bird, and butterfly, in the jungle. And about the fruit from malakaji you can find passion fruit, coffee tree, and any else. and dont forget about vegetable in malakaji you can find much vegetable bacause all of vegetable can grow if you plant.

And then about culture of malakaji is very extrim, because there culture is a dominan and if you make fault you can get a punishment from the people there example you runaway with girl there you just have two choice first is dead, or go far from there and never back again, so because that many boy and girl there very afraid if they must make a big fault its a culture of makassar no one can change it.

Malakaji is a good place but not for tour, and then malakaji is one of the small town at Gowa malakji it so near with lompobattang montain, the people of malakji is majority of farmer, and you can find many fruit or vegetable there, but the culture there it so extrim but i really love my hometown, because there is my village, i have so much famliy there and i wanna go there if i have holiday